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Vampire by ~Sick-little-Wolfboy:iconSick-little-Wolfboy:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Ballad


Every moment...
                 Every day...
                         I watch you grow...
    I watch you change...
                                          I do not change...
            I do know why...
                                  I am vampire...
  For that I cry...
                   But normal tears I do not weep...
        For tears of blood...
                              Is all that seeps...
                        From my eyes...
             When I cry...
                                               Fear me...
                                     Pity me...
I am...
               Vampire...
                                        I am...
                   Alone...
©2004-2009 ~Sick-little-Wolfboy
:iconsick-little-wolfboy:

Author's Comments

The cruel life of a vampire.

Comments


:iconeyes-upon-scars:
~eyes-upon-scars Jun 6, 2004, 1:53:58 AM
thats..... wow... amazing

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-all of us-
all of us are searching for an open arm
well, it's a shame how i pull myself apart.
:iconsick-little-wolfboy:
~Sick-little-Wolfboy Jun 6, 2004, 2:11:30 AM
Thank you. I hope it was to your liking.
:iconeyes-upon-scars:
~eyes-upon-scars Jun 6, 2004, 2:26:53 AM
indeed it was... i thoroughly enjoyed it...
have a read of my journal entry... see what you think.. but yeah that was beautiful

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-all of us-
all of us are searching for an open arm
well, it's a shame how i pull myself apart.
:iconsick-little-wolfboy:
~Sick-little-Wolfboy Jun 6, 2004, 4:01:05 AM
Loved your journal entry, it was unbelivible. i really hope you read some of my other works.
:iconastasiastock:
~astasiaSTOCK Jun 7, 2004, 11:25:09 PM
It's wonderful! ^^ I love how you took the time to make it visually appealing as well; placing the pieces in different spots... it makes your eyes move moreso that normal, and really gets your attention. Very powerful. Great work! Please write more poems. :D

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~*~*~ lace me up ~*~*~
:iconsick-little-wolfboy:
~Sick-little-Wolfboy Jun 7, 2004, 11:40:37 PM
Thank you, I knew that little detail would be worth it :D I will let you know when I post more poems.
:iconnightwingdragon:
~nightwingdragon Jun 9, 2004, 8:29:52 AM
Dude, Outstanding work, It delivers itself quite well.
In my opinion the last two lines hit the hardest. "I am vampire, I am alone." It illustrates a more tragic figure rather than evil or bloodthirsty, which I like more.

I also have some poetry, my best work though is Bestia De La Luna (translates to Beast of the moon). If you feel like reading it, here's a [link]
Thanks for all your support.

--
~nightwingdragon:heart:~panterasuno2
:skullbones: :skullbones:
Slurm~ It's highly addictive!:finger:
:iconsick-little-wolfboy:
~Sick-little-Wolfboy Jun 9, 2004, 10:52:27 PM
Woah, major compliment...
Thanks...
I knew those last 2 lines would really hit hard...
And I will definitly check your poetry out...
Thanks again dude...
:iconeyes-upon-scars:
~eyes-upon-scars Jun 10, 2004, 2:35:26 AM
guess what!!!!! im gonna do a special pic for you!!! for this one... i love this piece so much,... it would be nice to see a pic go with it...
what do you thin?
it might take me a while but i will get probably the best pic i could ever do for this....
sounds good?
let me know
:)

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-all of us-
all of us are searching for an open arm
well, it's a shame how i pull myself apart.
:iconsick-little-wolfboy:
~Sick-little-Wolfboy Jun 10, 2004, 11:57:05 AM
Sounds great love...
I can hardly wait...
:) :blackrose:
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